Sunday, August 05, 2007

one flaw

satisfaction or even pleasure was all that I had planned
but many outcomes only served to tire or to disturb
as if some god reviewed each script and panned
one flaw of intentions small and grand
my flesh reports that I am a noun
bruising continues until I see mind is just a verb

4 comments:

Gerry said...

Bloody hedonistic poetry !!! Grrr... :-)

Davo said...

To verb, or not to verb ..
Superb.

GreenSmile said...

Thank you, Davo.

Gerry said...

Bravo, Davo!