satisfaction or even pleasure was all that I had planned
but many outcomes only served to tire or to disturb
as if some god reviewed each script and panned
one flaw of intentions small and grand
my flesh reports that I am a noun
bruising continues until I see mind is just a verb
4 comments:
Bloody hedonistic poetry !!! Grrr... :-)
To verb, or not to verb ..
Superb.
Thank you, Davo.
Bravo, Davo!
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